Kept 'swum'? It looks right, but it is about the coast. What she did is 'swam'. Kept 'Oregon', 'Mexico' or '900'? That is where and how far. 'Entire coast' already says all of it.
This one really happened. Catherine Breed, 33, from Mill Valley, set off from the Oregon border in July and swam about 900 miles down California's coast, crossing into Mexico in October. KSBW reports she is the first person to swim the whole coast. KSBW, October.
Every word, accounted for
California'sWhich coast. Stays.
entireAll of it, end to end. Stays.
coastWhat she swam. Stays.
aboutRoughly. Goes with 900.
900How far. 'Entire coast' already says it.
milesGoes with 900.
fromA little word. It only holds the sentence together.
theA little word. It only holds the sentence together.
OregonWhere she started.
borderGoes with Oregon.
toA little word. It only holds the sentence together.
MexicoWhere she finished. 'Entire coast' covers it.
hadA little word. It only holds the sentence together.
neverThat nobody had done it. True, but the answer is what she did.
beenA little word. It only holds the sentence together.
swumLooks right, but it is about the coast. What she did is 'swam'.
untilA little word. It only holds the sentence together.
aA little word. It only holds the sentence together.
MillWhere she is from.
ValleyGoes with Mill.
womanWho did it. Stays.
swamWhat she did. Stays.
itA little word. It only holds the sentence together.
startingWhen she set off.
inA little word. It only holds the sentence together.
JulyWhen.